my new rap single is finally out!

[noob_112]

NEW RAP ADDED!

i think i got some good flow in this piece... its the one from the "how do u wipe" thread

its done by a computer voice; i'm in the process of getting a rap star to do this... i'm thinkin snoop?

enjoy

Gangstas, Bitches and Feces
N_ggas wanna fuck wit me
shootin' at their boys while i'm wipin my feces
wipin it from da back,
ain't no other way, or your gonna get capped

The man wanna hold me down
ain't neva seen a nig that can wipe fo the crown
I rule the hood, like a king on my throne
don't fuck wit me, i'm a baller to the bone

Bitches got da junk in da trunk
but can't take a crump like the men with da junk
feces piled higher and higher,
I ain't flushin my shit, it's there to admire!

*NEW*

A Day of CRSX
Show off section first, to peep some fly rides
Makin fun of ricers, rollin without sides
Check da CP, to count up my reps
Fuck that shit, man, i’m neggin you next

Lookin at the sale threads to buy some more parts
Not fuckin with no used seats, I don’t want nobody’s farts
Club RSX store is where its at
If that shit don’t work, I can just send it back

Rollin to the lounge to check on some shit
B and B next to see how to touch yo mom’s clit
Fappin to da babe thread, cuz I'm feelin horney
I'm not ashamed; at least I'm not Warmy!

[noob_112]

no one??

[Zissou]

maybe if u werent panda crew

[noob_112]

maybe if u werent panda crew

i'm not panda crew... u really think there's 92 of those cock-loving fags? :rotfl:

also, note the :rolleyes: pointing up to my panda crew sig :thumbsup:

[Jadis]

post reported

[noob_112]

^ i guess some ppl just don't appreciate art

[noob_112]

anyone have some feedback... good or bad

[rsxxsj]

..........

[smoresrock]

lemme check it out..

[fatcircles]

the lyrics aint art

I rule the hood, like a king on my throne
don't fuck wit me, i'm a baller to the bone

Bitches got da junk in da trunk
but can't take a crump like the men with da junk
feces piled higher and higher,
I ain't flushin my shit, it's there to admire!

cmon now..

[fatcircles]

as lord finesse would say..

If rap was money youd be rated as food stamp
You try to boast and toast, you go by what name?
You cant get with finesse, youre just jump change
You couldnt cut it even if you had a hack-saw
Youre just a rap that I laid a track for
Cause records get mixed up, foes get ripped up
If a mic was a freak, Id get my tip sucked

[noob_112]

^got any other suggestions???

i feel with rap its all about delivery

not necessairly about the lyrics

[ChilliBang]

how are you delivering when you're not even the one singing, you just wrote on top that it's computer voiced.

[noob_112]

as lord finesse would say..

If rap was money youd be rated as food stamp
You try to boast and toast, you go by what name?
You cant get with finesse, youre just jump change
You couldnt cut it even if you had a hack-saw
Youre just a rap that I laid a track for
Cause records get mixed up, foes get ripped up
If a mic was a freak, Id get my tip sucked

but u didn't come up with that :weeeeeeeeee:

[noob_112]

how are you delivering when you're not even the one singing, you just wrote on top that it's computer voiced.

no, like i said, i'm gonna try and find someone to do it!

[fatcircles]

but u didn't come up with that :weeeeeeeeee:

no i was saying that he had good lyrics AND delivery (if youve heard lord finesse hes got crazy flow)

even still you can be a good rapper but if lyrics are really really bad it wont matter

[noob_112]

no i was saying that he had good lyrics AND delivery (if youve heard lord finesse hes got crazy flow)

even still you can be a good rapper but if lyrics are really really bad it wont matter

yea, i hear ya

but lots of the shit i hear on the radio sound slike a retarded 2nd grader pieced it together from his puked up aplha-bits

[cheechxu]

edit: sorry that was mean

[someone]

yea, i hear ya

but lots of the shit i hear on the radio sound slike a retarded 2nd grader pieced it together from his puked up aplha-bits

YOU CANT be serious....

this is why I'm hot..... (repeat like 5x)

I'm hot cuz I'm fly.... you ain't cuz you not! this is why this is why this is why I'm hot....

[noob_112]

edit: sorry that was mean

oh c'mon
what did u say! i don't mind criticism!

[noob_112]

YOU CANT be serious....

this is why I'm hot..... (repeat like 5x)

I'm hot cuz I'm fly.... you ain't cuz you not! this is why this is why this is why I'm hot....

pretty good flow man :thumbsup:

[dontevencare]

Days turn into years. "A" students turn into dropouts
Seeing the world from a creative angle turns into seeing it from a couch
Orgasms become lifetimes. Bong hits turn into white lines
A face becomes a dartboard and cardboard becomes a house
Boys turn into men. Enemies become your friends
Losing turns into winning and the beginning becomes the end
Words turn into magic. Rewind becomes a habit
Rabbits become vultures and cultures become trends
A party becomes a funeral. Sunlight turns into cancer
The rain turns beautiful. An unusual question becomes an answer
Happiness becomes a cataract. A sip turns into a six-pack
And Earth turns into Mars as my album becomes a standard
A hero becomes a statistic. A lost soul enlisted
The potholes are lifted as the hot coals leave you blistered
A sickness becomes a teardrop. A cup of coffee becomes a long day
Your best friend's guidance becomes the wrong way
As the song plays my voice becomes the past, present, and future
Transportation becomes pollution as humans become computers
Time becomes space. Minds become waste
And a person becomes less interested when a mic becomes an instrument
An age turns into a nightmare. Love becomes hate
The nine becomes a zero and every country becomes one state
All you thought you knew was just a foolish assumption
Yes, everything is something. But something is nothing

1212121

My favorites are rappers, the egoistical bastards
The people that never clap for your set, they think you're whacker
Than them 'cause they're the masters
I bet disaster is caused in their mind when you rhyme
and plaster their jaws shut with a fat verse
To him you're a hazard. Weak matter. A reason for laughter
He's preachin' he's live. But he's only that word backwards
After he dies, you can climb the ladder, start a chapter
Art you'll capture finally.
But while he breathes, m.c.'s don;t even flatter him
Add a tad if his acrobatical arrogance
To his genteically engineered emotional pattern of tearin' kids in battles
That'll explain why he mean mugs. He told ya' your team sucks
Said you dream of choking him with that mic cord
Instead, he blows your mind straight out your head
He says, "Fuck You!" with clarity. You cry hysterically
As it makes a parody of your passion
You tell friends you think he's tight
but secretly, you hope his career won't be lasting
'Cause he's an asshole. But you know he's got nice sound
You know what else? Your looking at him right now

[na_rsx]

i'm not panda crew... u really think there's 92 of those cock-loving fags? :rotfl:

also, note the :rolleyes: pointing up to my panda crew sig :thumbsup:

quoted for tr00f

[Davanca]

i feel with rap its all about delivery


It's about flow also.



If half these murder raps was true
You dudes be spittin
All our fans would be dead
Who’d be left to listen
Yo im sick of all the repetition
Too many un-experienced cooks
Ain’t what you chefed in da kitchen,
That’s where I slip in see these lyrical,
You ain’t saying nothing like a boring interview
The mind of a imbecile I was born November two-nine seven-two
But I still flow better than you,
the older I get the better I flow yo
It’s better you know the sooner your told
You can put the speculation on hold
Took a break to mess with the beats
But im still ready to roll

[Aphex]

sounds like this is a troll thread. ill check the file when i get home, but can tell its garbage already

[noob_112]

sounds like this is a troll thread. ill check the file when i get home, but can tell its garbage already

brah, listen to is before u judge :thumbsup:

[noob_112]

NEW rap added

i think this one is better, and u guys probably will like it better

[Krisen Type-S]

u gotta be kidding me :rotfl:

but ur 2nd one is better haha

[noob_112]

thanks bro
i'm workin on it

BUMP... for more opinions/feedback

[Aphex]

brah, listen to is before u judge :thumbsup:

whoa! listened. garbage. :rotfl: :rotfl:
don't quit your day job

[noob_112]

thats coo

what u sayin on the new CRSX rap?

[Frenchy]

garbage and garbage
next

[noob_112]

c'mon man, they're not THAT bad...


what if i said they were poems? would they be ok then?

[Frenchy]

that's nowhere near poems, and yes, it's THAT bad, and even worse

[noob_112]

that's nowhere near poems, and yes, it's THAT bad, and even worse

i can see how u can say my work isn't a trye rap, but you can't claim its not poetry :thumbsdow

hell, some poems don't even rhyme; at least mine do!

[White_02]

^ i guess some ppl just don't appreciate art

that's what you call it?

[Aphex]

dude stop it. both are corny as fuck and are a waste of everyone's time. including yours which you seem to have alot of

[Frenchy]

i can see how u can say my work isn't a trye rap, but you can't claim its not poetry :thumbsdow

hell, some poems don't even rhyme; at least mine do!

you don't even know what poetry is
stop now, you're starting to sound as bad as that guy who had that fubared cover with chess and AK's and shit....fucking pathetic

[noob_112]

dude stop it. both are corny as fuck and are a waste of everyone's time. including yours which you seem to have alot of

meh, just doin it for fun :dontknow:

[noob_112]

you don't even know what poetry is
stop now, you're starting to sound as bad as that guy who had that fubared cover with chess and AK's and shit....fucking pathetic

:confused:

wanna fill me in on what u just said??

[Aphex]

you don't even know what poetry is
stop now, you're starting to sound as bad as that guy who had that fubared cover with chess and AK's and shit....fucking pathetic

hahahaha i found that guy on another forum

Raise the Bar Records... ahahaha

[Krisen Type-S]

lol, as much as this guy sounds like a tool, some of the lines got a laugh out of me

[rsxxsj]

Lol..

[marcster]

...junk.

[ClevelandSteamers]

why did I click this thread!?!:?!?!?!

[youngn]

lol at bad raps. This is far from good.

[noob_112]

thanks for the feedbacks!

i'll post more when i finish them off!

[ChadB]

^ i guess some ppl just don't appreciate art

Is this you're idea of art?

http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/8586/wheels2ks0.png



:laughing: j/k no I'm not

[arizonarsx]

:rotfl: :rotfl: :rotfl:

you gotta be kidding me

[hueman]

awesome

[arizonarsx]

here's a real rap freestyle thread http://forums.clubrsx.com/showthread.php?t=436381

[noob_112]

^no

[fatcircles]

seriously tho these raps are terrible they are so amateur its like a 4th grader thought them up

don't try to find words that just rhyme with the other ones, and if anything use rhymezone.com to look for better words that rhyme otherwise they will just sound way too elementary.

[noob_112]

seriously tho these raps are terrible they are so amateur its like a 4th grader thought them up

don't try to find words that just rhyme with the other ones, and if anything use rhymezone.com to look for better words that rhyme otherwise they will just sound way too elementary.

:( well, i tried my best :rotfl:

[gordykeefers]

hahaha the computer voice totally made it

[rsxxsj]

hahaha the computer voice totally made it

:rotfl:

[stryker]

i liked this line

"Lookin at the sale threads to buy some more parts
Not fuckin with no used seats, I don’t want nobody’s farts"

[noob_112]

i liked this line

"Lookin at the sale threads to buy some more parts
Not fuckin with no used seats, I don’t want nobody’s farts"

:giggitygiggity:

c'mon, some lines aren't THAT bad...

if a black dude rapped them, you all would be all over dat sheeeit

[knag]

what's a N_gga?

[byruns]

but seriously..

:rotfl:

[noob_112]

what's a N_gga?

you'll know when someone steals ur TV